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To Eden (16/?) 
19th-Jun-2010 10:04 pm
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Title: To Eden (16/?)
Pairing: Kangteuk, Hanchul, Yewook, Eunhae, Sibum, Kyumin, Zhoury
Summary: In a society where males and females live together only if in love (true love), the rest (the singles) wage a secret war on each other through the use of spies. Their goal: obtain the master list of soulmates


Chapter 16

Minnie smiled as she led Wolf, closely guarded by Wookie and Snow White, to his new home. She stopped in front of a blank white door and knocked. She opened the door and led them inside.
Mochi smiled from her place beside the prison. She was excited to actually be able to use another one of her prototypes (Snow White was using one for Horse).
“Hi Mochi, everything all set?”
“Yep, come on in.” Minnie smiled as she walked further into the room, dragging Wolf behind her. “It has everything you wanted and move.”
Mochi stepped aside to allow Minnie to enter the mock-up cave. Minnie smiled as she looked around. She pulled Wolf inside and chained him to the wall.
“Comfortable?”
Wolf gave her a sarcastic smile. “Very.”
“Good.” She kissed his cheek. “Now be a good boy. I’ll see you later.”
She came out of the cave and closed it behind her. She took the control from Mochi with a smile.
“Thanks for your help, girls. Come on, let’s go celebrate. They can’t escape.”
They laughed as they left the room to go eat something together.

~*~|~*~

Monkey woke up to find the bed empty beside him. He sat up and looked around to find a note on the bedside table.
Hi Hyukkie. Sorry I left without saying goodbye but I had an urgent call. I really wish I could’ve woken up next to you. Maybe next time. :D I love you. Will see you later today or tomorrow. Love, Hae
Monkey smiled to himself as he got out of bed. He went into the bathroom and turned on the water. He took off his clothes and stepped into the shower.
Arms wrapped around his waist, startling him. He turned his head to see Hae smiling at him.
“Hi.”
“Hi.” Hae leaned up and kissed him. She hugged him tighter.
“How are you?”
“Better now that you’re here.”
“That’s good.” Hae grabbed the bar of soap and began scrubbing his back. Monkey decided to return the favor. He turned around, grabbed the shampoo, and began washing her hair.
The two washed each other in companionable silence but an accidental brush, a light touch here and there led to something more.

Monkey turned off the water and carried an exhausted Hae to his bed. He gently tucked her in before slipping in beside her. He wrapped his arms around her and fell asleep.

~*~|~*~

Wookie was busy making breakfast. She turned around to set the table. It didn’t surprise her to see Turtle already seated at the table. She sat down and began eating.
“What do you want?”
“Besides your food, to warn you.”
Wookie looked at Turtle. “I don’t need a warning.”
“I think you do. Even Angel doesn’t know about this.”
“And you think I don’t know that?” Wookie glared at Turtle. “You seem to underestimate me a lot, Jongwoon, and I don’t appreciate that one bit.”
She stood up from the table, taking her plate with her. She placed it in the sink and looked out the little window.
“I would like if it you left and don’t return until you can actually accept me.”
“What do you mean? I do accept you. I love you.”
Wookie whirled around in fury.
“No, you don’t. You treat me like a stupid naïve female, which I’m not. I haven’t been one since I was ten when –“ She bit her lip and turned back around, shocked.
“Wookie…”
“No, don’t touch me. Just leave and don’t return.” Wookie waited as she listened to him leave.
As soon as the door shut, she crumpled on the floor, overcome by tears. It had been years since she had thought about that day that had changed her life forever. She thought she was finally over it, after all these years.
Arms wrapped around her, pulling her into someone’s comforting embrace. She leaned on their shoulder and let all the tears out.
Turtle stroked her hair and back and began to sing a low soft melody. Wookie began to quiet down thanks to Turtle’s soothing voice and comforting embrace. She rubbed her eyes and sniffed, looking at Turtle.
“Wh-what are you doing here? I-I told you to-to leave.”
“How could I when you’re upset? I’m connected to you now. I know you, know when you’re happy, when you’re sad, when you’re angry.”
Wookie sniffed. “No, you don’t. You always try to keep me out of harms way. You treat me like a child, someone stupid and naïve.”
“I only treat you that way because I care so much about you. I love you. I don’t want anything to happen to you.”
“Well you can do that without insulting my intelligence.” Wookie glared at Turtle. “I’m just as good as you, maybe even better. I bet I know things you don’t.”
“Maybe but you don’t need to tell me to prove it. I know you might be better than me but I can’t help it. There’s something about you that makes me want to treat you like a precious little child. I’m sorry for insulting your intelligence, I don’t mean to.”
Wookie looked at Turtle, wondering if she could actually trust him. Turtle wrapped his arms around her and kissed her cheek. He kept placing kisses all over her face until she smiled.
“Alright, alright. I believe you. But next time you insult me, I will hurt you.”
“Do your worst.” Turtle smiled at Wookie who laughed and gave him a loving kiss.

~*~|~*~

Dragon smiled looking at Cinderell’s sleeping form. She was everything he had ever wanted. She was so forward, never shied from his secret kinks; she actually enjoyed them.
Cinderella mumbled in her sleep. Dragon smiled. She made him feel whole, complete. It was like she was made for him, like she was his soulmate.
He smiled to himself. He was never going to find another woman like her.
He was going to make sure she stayed in his life, no matter what.
Dragon leaned down and gently kissed her cheek. Before slipping away.

Cinderella woke up to an interesting smell. She opened her eyes and found a rose in front of her. She sat up and smiled, sniffing the rose. She looked around and gasped. Dragon, dressed in a suit, stood by a beautifully decorated table set for two.
“Hankyung?”
“Get dressed. Then we’ll eat.”

After quickly showering and changing into the clothes hanging in the bathroom, Cinderella came back out. She took a seat across from Dragon and smiled when he put a plate of food in front of her. The two ate in silence. After they were both finished did Cinderella say something.
“So am I supposed to be your prisoner or your guest? Because I can’t tell from the way you treat me at all. But I figure I’m your prisoner. I mean why would I ever by your guest?” She looked at Dragon with a smile. “And since that’s the case…”
Cinderella lunged forward only to hit an invisible wall. She fell back into her chair. Cuffs sprang out and kept her locked to the chair. She glared at Dragon from her seat. He only sighed.
“I was afraid this would happen.” He turned away and walked to the door. “Since this is how you feel, I have no choice but to keep you here as my prisoner.”
He opened the door and walked out, leaving Cinderella alone in his room, cuffed to a chair.

~*~|~*~

Snow White smiled as she walked back into the room. Horse glared at her from his spot.
“Hello, how are you?”
“You left me like this for two hours.”
“Actually one and a half hours. Keep your time straight.” She smiled and sat down in front of her computer.
Horse watched as she began tapping away at the keyboard.
“Uh…are you really going to leave me like this again?”
“But I thought you wanted to stay there for 2 hours.” She looked at her watch. “You still have 26 minutes and 10 seconds left.” She smiled before turning back to her computer.
“You’re cruel, leaving a man in this state for 2 hours.”
Snow White looked over her shoulder at him. “Like you wouldn’t do the same thing or worse.” She smiled before turning back to her computer. “Don’t do the crime if you can’t do the time.”
Horse glared at Snow White. “When I get out of here, you are going to be in so much trouble.”
“I’d like to see you try.” Snow White grinned before turning back to her computer, leaving Horse chained there, seething in anger and frustration.

~*~|~*~

Raccoon smiled at all the boys assembled in front of him.
“Alright, you have the information. Go make me proud.”
Everyone smiled before they left.
Raccoon smiled to himself.
The boys were going to win for once in his life and there was nothing Angel could do about it.


A/N: so another update...depending, may update again tomorrow :D depends on how i feel

now, in a couple days or so i will be leaving for Korea and China. will be gone for 11 weeks which means i may/may not be able to update while i'm gone (will have internet but might be too busy to write) so we'll see what happens during that time alright?
so in a few days, i will be on a temporary hiatus, don't know how long but who knows? may be lucky to update a few times while i'm gone...but don't get your hopes up (i don't want to disappoint)
love all my readers :D ♥
Comments 
20th-Jun-2010 05:05 am (UTC)
Spot for my dongsaeng :D
20th-Jun-2010 12:11 pm (UTC)
this seems like a long update.............maybe im just out of it rite now
kekekekeke

cute note from donghae to eunhyuk *squeals*
egads~! (wow i havent used that in a while) whats kangin gonna do????

wahhhh gone for 11 week~~~~ TT.TT
i like to think of it as a few months because it seems shorter to me that way^^
20th-Jun-2010 06:47 pm (UTC)
lol it sort of is...XD
lol you need to wait and see

lol you think however you want XD we'll see each other though

love ♥
20th-Jun-2010 05:45 am (UTC)
OMO GIRLS RULEZ!!!!GO GO GIRLS!!!
20th-Jun-2010 06:48 pm (UTC)
yep :D

love ♥
20th-Jun-2010 06:50 am (UTC)
yea^^ battle of the boys and girls^^ owh...owh...please make more KangTeuk moment...please^^...thank you^^....hehehehe...okie2...i'll wait for your next chappie^^
20th-Jun-2010 06:55 pm (UTC)
yes battle of the boys and girls :D
lol we'll see about Kangteuk moments...no guarantees though...

love ♥
20th-Jun-2010 08:13 am (UTC)
Hooray for Eunhae!! 8DDD

11 weeks?! *gasps* that'll be a bit long but I'll wait for your update no matter what =.~

Have fun on your trip :D
20th-Jun-2010 07:00 pm (UTC)
yep :D

lol alright :D
thanks :D

love ♥
20th-Jun-2010 12:46 pm (UTC)
Anonymous
Why do you have to go?
Pouts*
Heheh,I shall drag you back into writing more. :P
HEHEHEH. ^^
Thanks anyway. (L)
20th-Jun-2010 07:01 pm (UTC)
i just have to...it's for school XD

we'll see about that XD

love ♥
29th-Jun-2010 04:44 am (UTC)
omg FINALLY got around to reading XD

That Eunhae moment. . .had to be the cutest thing EVER.
HanChul's relationship is so confusing sometimes, haa
7th-Jul-2010 04:06 pm (UTC)
lol XD
yep :D
and i guess it might be confusing? i don't know...XD

love ♥
17th-Jul-2010 02:11 am (UTC)
new reader here XDXD
wokkie is totally an umma XDXD
hehehe
euhae~~~ love love
can't wait for the next chapter hehe
nice fic
keep up the great work :D
17th-Jul-2010 06:34 am (UTC)
yep :D lol
thanks :D

love ♥
18th-Jul-2010 01:31 pm (UTC)
Okay! So first I really like your fic. I may have already said it but it's so interesting, well written and funny and... Just like it.
Then I like the way things are heading to. It's so captivating. I can't wait to read what is Racoon plan.
Then since I'm a EunHae bias reader I want you to know I loved the way you wrote their relationship. Though you may know I'm not used seeing Hyuk as the top, it wasn't a porblem in your fic. Especially thanks to Hae who was the one leading xDD
Then I'm still so fond of Wolf and Tutrle! They're just so... cool, funny (for Worlf) and kind (for Turtle) I can't not loving them.
I'll end it here. And thanks for sharing that story ♥
31st-Jul-2010 04:12 pm (UTC)
thanks :D

love ♥
3rd-Aug-2010 12:27 pm (UTC)
LOVE!!!! this is very interesting. i have just seen this while m very bored and check every blog of my friends.

SPEECHLESS!!! totally i love all your fics, just m a silent reader.

anyway can u spot me for he next chapter? thank a lot ^^
3rd-Aug-2010 01:15 pm (UTC)
thanks :D

sure, i can give you a spot when i upload my next chapter (which probably won't be for a while...since on vacation)

love ♥
3rd-Aug-2010 02:11 pm (UTC)
thankYU!!!

anyway, i can't forget a sense which Kyu said to Min that: "i am sorry that i can't be gentle"

hmmm, maybe i remember wrong but somehow that meaning.
4th-Aug-2010 01:33 pm (UTC)
hmm...that sounds familiar but i don't know where it's from...
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14th-Oct-2010 07:18 pm (UTC)
i'll update soon, i promise...just been a little preoccupied with school and stuff...
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