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To Eden (13/?) 
8th-Jun-2010 09:13 pm
Title: To Eden (13/?)
Pairing: Kangteuk, Hanchul, Yewook, Eunhae, Sibum, Kyumin, Zhoury
Summary: In a society where males and females live together only if in love (true love), the rest (the singles) wage a secret war on each other through the use of spies. Their goal: obtain the master list of soulmates

Chapter 13

Dragon smiled at Cinderella still chained to the wall. “Feel any better?”
She glared at him. “You left a sexually frustrated me chained to a wall. How do you think I feel?”
He grinned. “Well what do you think I should do now?”
“Finish what you started. Don’t leave me unsatisfied.”
Dragon walked over to her, a smile on both their faces. He stopped a foot away and leaned his head down towards her. He stopped an inch from her mouth. Cinderella held her breath in anticipation. He smiled before moving his lips across her cheek to her ear.
“I think I’ll leave you like this a little bit longer.”
Cinderella gaped as Dragon smiled and moved away from her. He sat down in his chair and pulled out a book. She stared as he began to read, completely ignoring her.
“Dragon! Dragon! Hankyung! You can’t leave me like this.”
“I can and I will. Now be quiet while I read. If you’re good, I’ll reward you.”
Cinderella glared at him. “You better. I’m keeping you to that.”
“I will, I will. Don’t you worry.” Dragon smiled at her before returning to his book.


Minnie woke up to find herself lying in a soft silk bed. She smiled as she stretched and sat up. She looked down and gasped. She was wearing very lacy, see-through, sexy lingerie in a shade of pretty pink.
“Oh, you’re awake.”
She looked at the door and gasped. Wolf was standing there, dressed all in black and holding a tray of food.
“Kyuhyun, what’s going on? Where am I and why am I dressed like this?”
“Questions, questions, questions. Can’t you just relax and enjoy?” He placed the tray on the table, sat on the bed, and gave her a kiss. “Here, have some. You must be starving. You haven’t eaten for hours.”
At the first bite, Minnie couldn’t believe how hungry she was. She kept eating every spoonful Wolf fed her. Before long, the entire bowl was empty.
“Yes, thank you. Now answer my questions.” She turned to look at Wolf who had leaned down to kiss her.
“Later, right now I just want you to relax.” Wolf kissed her, gently pushing her back down as his hands moved up and down her body.
Minnie melted into the kiss, wrapping her arms around Wolf’s neck. She pulled away and smiled at him. He smiled back. He leaned down to kiss her neck but she stopped him.
“Look at me.” Wolf stared into Minnie’s eyes. She smiled so sweetly he didn’t register the glint shining in her eyes before it was too late.
In a flash, she hit that one nerve and knocked him out.
Wolf collapsed on top of Minnie who quickly rolled him over. She got out of bed and quickly searched the room for clothes. There was nothing. The room was empty except for the pieces of furniture.
Minnie looked around until she spotted Wolf on the bed. An idea popped into her head.


“Siwon, Siwon, Siwon,” Snow White shook her head, “why must you always try to run away? You know I’m not going to let my horse get away from me now that I finally have it. My Horsey is supposed to take me to my Prince Charming when the time comes.”
“You can’t keep me here forever, trapped in this stall.”
“I know. But until you’re a good lil Horsey, you’re going to stay in that stall. Try to run away again and I’m going to punish you like the other bad Horseys.”
Snow White smiled before sitting down in front of the computer. Horse looked at her, debating his options, weighing the consequences. He decided it was worth the risk.
Horse quietly opened his stall door and stuck a foot out. He was instantly thrown back into the stall. He looked up to see Sow White walking towards him, a whip in her hand. His eyes widened in surprise.
“I warned you what would happen if you tried to run away again. I guess you wanted to be punished.” She tapped the whip against her hand and smiled evilly at Horse. He cowered in fear as Snow White loomed over him.


Monkey had barely shut the door before he was pinned against the door and his mouth ravished.
Hae pulled away and smiled at the dazed expression on Monkey’s face. “Hi.”
Hae pouted. “What took you so long? I’ve been waiting here for 2 minutes.”
“2 minutes? That’s not that long.”
“Yes it is. Any time away from you is too long.”
Monkey looked at Hae as they settled on the couch. “When did you get to sappy? When I first met you, I didn’t think you’d be like this.”
“I’m normally not but something about you makes me this way. I don’t know. I can’t explain it.”
“I think I know what you mean.” Monkey pulled Hae closer and kissed her forehead. “It’s love.”
Monkey smiled at Hae’s expression. “You’re adorable.” He kissed her nose, making her pout.
“So what do you want to do?”
Hae thought for a moment before smiling. “What we started before we were interrupted.”

A/N: so i update again XD sooner than i expected but who cares? and i think i'll update again tomorrow once i actually finish my final XD
9th-Jun-2010 04:14 am (UTC)
Spot for my dongsaeng :D
9th-Jun-2010 06:35 pm (UTC)
minnie's idea.......*chuckles evilly*

cutesy eunhae love~
9th-Jun-2010 07:45 pm (UTC)
lol yep :D

love ♥
9th-Jun-2010 04:40 am (UTC)
update soon please ... ^^
9th-Jun-2010 05:21 am (UTC)
lol XD i probably will...soon...like tomorrow? XD

love ♥
9th-Jun-2010 07:09 am (UTC)
I'm waiting ^^
9th-Jun-2010 05:37 am (UTC)
Hello! :D
Thanks for your update Unnie(?)! :D
I'm Joey. ^^
9th-Jun-2010 05:31 pm (UTC)
lol no problem XD

Unni is only used by girls when they talk to older females
Noona is only used by boys when they talk to older females
Dongsaeng is for someone younger than you

i don't know if i'm an unni to you or not XD, i'm 19 years old, how old are you?

love ♥
9th-Jun-2010 07:59 am (UTC)
what is Minnie thinking?? hechullie and siwon are still stock x]
EunHae!! xD

update soon!!
I'll be waiting
9th-Jun-2010 05:31 pm (UTC)
heeheehee :D

love ♥
9th-Jun-2010 08:36 am (UTC)
ROFLXD minnie...i think i know minnie's idea^^ hehehehe...update soon^^ love it^^
9th-Jun-2010 05:32 pm (UTC)
heeheehee you'll have to wait and see :D

love ♥
9th-Jun-2010 10:36 am (UTC)
waiting for tomorrow... :3
And i think i know Minnie's idea~
and EunHae is the cutest couple ever<3333
Poor Cinderella tho, left sexually frustrated 8D
9th-Jun-2010 05:38 pm (UTC)
lol uh huh :D

love ♥
9th-Jun-2010 11:48 am (UTC)
awww love it...what did min did to kyu...i pity siwon kibum is hurting him...
9th-Jun-2010 05:38 pm (UTC)
you'll have to wait and see
and i won't say anything about kibum and siwon...you'll see for yourself later :D

love ♥
9th-Jun-2010 04:53 pm (UTC)
OMG!!!!! I'm late to read this ~
The last chapter that i read is the 6th Chapter and now you already made the 13th !!!!!!!

Btw, i'm sorry for being a silent reader and never give you any comment T.T
But i can't comment from the first chapter until the last update. *ROLF*

I love Kyuhyun's job in here. Makes me remember of myself.
I love to sit infront of my computer start hacking and cracking my enemies too. It's really fun to be a hacker, coz you can know everything and anything. Even i already know Shindong's twitter password but since i still respect for another people bussiness especially he's my idol, i never want to open his account. XD

And why did you make the things going hard !!!! I though you would gather all the couples and make the story more romantic or something ...
Ok ~ Don't listen to my comment if it's irritating you. I just like to make the things goes easily :p

And about Leeteuk and Kangin.
Are they a couple too? I'm still confuse. Why are they make a desicion about the list?

And i love EunHae couple *always*
They look cute together. And i think Kyuhyun is too horny until he can't fight back when Sungmin attack him. He should be just in his room and start hacking something. But i hope KyuMin will announce as a soulmate too soon.

Ok .. I know if my comment is too long.
I just want to give you my review about your fic from the first chapter.
I really love this fic actually but sorry if i just realize that you already update it T.T
I'll wait for the next chapter <3333
And make sure you post it soon ok! ^^
9th-Jun-2010 05:39 pm (UTC)
lol it's ok XD

lol wow...uh huh...good thing you respect his privacy :D
you'll have to wait and see about Leeteuk and Kangin :D
yes Eunhae is cute :D
you'll see about Kyumin :D

love ♥
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