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To Eden (9/?) 
26th-May-2010 02:02 pm
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Title: To Eden (9/?)
Pairing: Kangteuk, Hanchul, Yewook, Eunhae, Sibum, Kyumin, Zhoury
Summary: In a society where males and females live together only if in love (true love), the rest (the singles) wage a secret war on each other through the use of spies. Their goal: obtain the master list of soulmates


Chapter 9

Mochi came back to headquarters to find the “security” asleep. She quietly went upstairs, braced for a surprise attack. She found the hallway deserted. She quietly crept down the hall and paused outside a closed door.
“Going somewhere?”
Mochi turned around and found Zhoumi towering over her. “Z-Z-Zhoumi?”
Zhoumi grinned and picked Mochi up, carrying her away.

~*~|~*~

Minnie raced down the halls. She could hear Wolf gaining on her. She turned left and went through the door. She closed it only to have it burst open a few seconds later.
Wolf grinned when he realized Minnie was now effectively trapped. He quickly moved towards her, pinning her against the wall. He grabbed both her hands and quickly handcuffed her.
“Ooo…kinky…” Wolf looked at Minnie who smiled and winked at him. She lifted her hands and placed them around his neck. “So now that you have me handcuffed, what are you going to do to me?”
Wolf grinned. “Finish what I started.”

~*~|~*~

Snow White looked at Horse over her cup of coffee. “You know, from your profile, I never would’ve figured you’d be so cheap. Kissing a girl to distract her while you tie her up. That’s a very low trick for someone considered a gentleman.”
Horse smiled at Snow White from the computer. “I have no morals when it comes to work. Anything goes.”
“Oh really?”
“Yeah.” Horse nodded and smiled, turning to look at Snow White. The chair he had placed her in was empty. He turned around to be met with a smiling Snow White.
“Uh…” Snow White pounced, knocking them down, Horse too stunned to try and block the attack. She attacked his lips, making Horse groan. He wanted to touch her but couldn’t move his arms. He pulled away and looked up to see his hands tied together. He looked up at Snow White, wide-eyed. She grinned.
“An eye for an eye. Now be a good boy and just stay there while I do some stuff.” Snow White got up and had barely taken a step before she was grabbed from behind and dipped back, lips covering hers. She wrapped an arm around Horse’s neck and deepened the kiss for a few seconds before pushing away.
“A truce for now.”
“Normally I would say yes but I have specific orders I must obey.”
“Aww, that’s too bad.” Snow White pouted. Horse gave a sheepish smile. He walked towards the computer, only to be yanked back to Snow White.
“Like I would let you go that easily.” She smiled, holding a chain that attached to the collar around his neck.
“Since you didn’t want to be treated like a human being, I’ll treat you like an animal – like a horse.” She walked over to the wall, dragging Siwon along.
She tied the chain to a small hook on the wall. She wrapped it around Horse and threaded it through metal holes to securely lock Horse in place. Then she pushed a button and a mock stable stall popped up.
“You have room to move around but you’re effectively locked in. My prisoner now.”
Snow White smiled and whistled as she went back to her spot in front of the computer.

~*~|~*~

Monkey pulled away and looked down at the silent Hae. “You’re so beautiful.”
Hae stiffened and without thinking, slapped Monkey across the face. She was about to hit him again when Monkey took a hold of both her wrists. She resisted when he tried to pull her closer but he only tugged harder until she tumbled into his embrace.
The warmth she felt finally broke her and she started crying on Monkey’s shoulder. Monkey held her close, letting her cry, doing his best to comfort her.
“Shh, shh, it’s alright. Don’t hold it in, just let it all out.” Hae sobbed into his shoulder. Monkey gently picked her up and carried her to the first room he saw. He placed her on the chair before going to close and lock the door. He came back to Hae with a box of tissue.
“Feel any better?”
Hae nodded her head. “Why-why are you being so nice to me?”
“Why shouldn’t I? You’re a woman. Doesn’t matter if you’re my enemy, but when you start crying, I can’t help but want to comfort you, even more so since it’s you.”
“What do you mean?”
“I-I can’t explain it but,” Monkey looked at Hae, “there’s like a bond between us. Something that pulls, that bounds me to you. I don’t ever want to hurt you.”
Tears filled Hae’s eyes again. “You’re-you’re so-so nice to me even-even though we’re on opposite teams.” Hae blew her nose. “You’re-you’re so much better than-than the other guy.”
“Other guy?”
“Yeah. A-A few years ago, I went to this club with my friends. I met this guy and we seemed to hit it off. He was so nice. Then he asked me to go home with him. I was about to agree when something stopped me.”
“Something stopped you?”
“Yeah. It was weird but anyway I told him no but he wouldn’t accept it. He kept asking and asking but I refused him every time. Then he – then he just-just snapped. He grabbed me and-and dragged me into a back alley where he – where he –“ Hae made a gesture, too choked up to speak.
“He raped you?!?!?”
Hae nodded. “It-it-it was horrifying. That-that was never supposed to happen…we-we weren’t meant for each other, but he couldn’t see that. I-I guess he was blinded…I don’t know… After-after it was done, I-I felt so broken, completely torn apart. I became depressed like I couldn’t love anymore.”
Hae took another tissue to blow her nose. “After that, I became cynical of men. I hated them which I guess somehow ended up with me joining the team.”
“I can’t imagine what that must’ve been like. I’m sorry you had to experience that. If I could, I would go back in time and defend you. You shouldn’t have had to experience that.” Monkey reached up to gently wipe a tear away.
“It’s-it’s alright. I’ve moved on, become a different, stronger person. It’s made me who I am today.”
“And I love that person.”
“What?” Hae looked at Monkey, shocked.
“You heard me. I love you.”
“But-but we-we just –“ Monkey placed a finger over Hae’s lips to silence her.
“It doesn’t matter. Love doesn’t care about anything; it’s love.”
“But how can you –“
“Shh…when it’s true, you know.” Monkey looked lovingly at Hae. He leaned down and gently kissed her. Hae instantly responded. He pulled away and smiled. “I’ll give you time to –“
“I love you too.”
“What?” Monkey stared at Hae, shocked.
“When it’s true, you know.” She kissed Monkey and smiled. “I love you, Lee Hyukjae.”
“What? How did –“ Hae silenced Monkey with her lips.
She pulled back and grinned. “My name’s Lee Donghae. Now you can respond.”
Monkey smiled. “I love you, Lee Donghae.”
Hae smiled. “I love you too, Lee Hyukjae. Now – what?” The two stared at the light surrounding them.
With a flash, the two disappeared.


A/N: so I decided to update again XD, sorry it took me a while but I've been so busy, only have two more weeks left of school before summer break :D I'll see if I can update again this week or not (supposed to be working on a paper XD)
and sorry to princess_jaded, I'm no longer saving you a spot since you don't always comment on them...(I will give you your spot if any significant kyumin happens though since you might comment then XD)
and I would like to say sorry to all Donghae lovers, did not expect to have that angsty past for Donghae, it was all unintentional, just happened when I was writing...
Comments 
26th-May-2010 09:02 pm (UTC)
Spot for dongsaeng minti_panda93
26th-May-2010 09:42 pm (UTC)
mwahahahahahahhhhh mochiiiiiii

no sad!hae TT.TT
find that b*****d and kill him~

http://twitpic.com/1pniy2
kekekekkeekeke
26th-May-2010 09:53 pm (UTC)
lol yep mochi XD
yes that should happen but probably won't be mentioned...

lol i saw that pic already, i think on eeteuk's twitter XD

love ♥
26th-May-2010 09:12 pm (UTC)
Lol! Fair enough. My bias sways my comments I suppose.

But to be honest, in this chapter, I didn't really care about the KyuMin - the EunHae part was my focus. Poor Hae. She had the messed up end of this soulmate business.

I really like how, as they accept their love, they are being transported away. :)
26th-May-2010 09:55 pm (UTC)
lol yep XD

yes Eunhae was the main focus here...and yes poor Hae...i don't know why she has to get the messed up end...there's something going on in my head...i just don't know what XD

there's a reason for that XD :D

love ♥
26th-May-2010 10:51 pm (UTC)
Awh, poor Hae~!
27th-May-2010 02:42 am (UTC)
yep poor Hae...

love ♥
27th-May-2010 01:36 am (UTC)
Aww Hae. I'm sure Monkey will help heal her moree. So cutee.
27th-May-2010 02:42 am (UTC)
uh huh :D

love ♥
27th-May-2010 02:00 am (UTC)
Anonymous
Ohmygod.
Where were you?!
I miss you! D:
Anyway,Thanks for your update! ^^
Waiting for the next! :D
27th-May-2010 02:43 am (UTC)
i'm sorry, i was busy, i'm still in school...
lol XD

love ♥
27th-May-2010 03:11 am (UTC)
hahaha love it eunhae moment...can't wait for the next update and the progress of both groups
27th-May-2010 03:22 am (UTC)
lol thanks :D

love ♥
27th-May-2010 04:30 am (UTC)
the man who raped Donghae may die.
May Lee Donghae and Lee Hyukjae live happily ever after~<3
what's the light? :3
27th-May-2010 04:52 am (UTC)
uh huh :D
you'll have to wait and find out :D

love ♥
27th-May-2010 05:27 am (UTC)
such a tease > 3
27th-May-2010 08:42 am (UTC)
kyuhyun,zhoumi...hahahahahha very...very...very naughty thoughts huh...hahahahaha^^ and bummie can resist wonnie's charm...wow~~~! ....aww, i feel sorry for donghae's past...so sadT_T....anyway, hyukkie is there to be donghae's other half....i love it^_^
28th-May-2010 05:41 am (UTC)
yep XD
uh huh :D

love ♥
27th-May-2010 10:15 am (UTC)
Poor Donghae :'(

Naughty Kyumin is so smexy8DDD

Is Eunhae next to Yewook? Ohhh Can't wait for the next one~
28th-May-2010 05:42 am (UTC)
yep :( so sad...
of course it is ;)

love ♥
31st-May-2010 01:08 pm (UTC)
Sorry for commenting really late! I was in the land of censorship for Shisus' sake!

Poor Hae... Why?! WHY?! But nevermind. At least EunHae have now happily accepted their love for each other... But what the holy Wookie is that place they're transported to?!
3rd-Jun-2010 01:00 am (UTC)
lol it's ok XD

yep yep yep :D
heeheehee...you'll see (or you did already since it was mentioned in the next chapter XD)

love ♥
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